Okay so. if this is your first song its really good..i mean compared to my first song its..i dont want to talk about it.. anyways, there are a few issues with the mixing, i can hear clipping (which means that the sound is too loud and it gets distorted) which can be fixed by lowering the volume enough or compressing, i also think the pads are a little too loud in my opinion. So apart from some small issues the song is good, also the piano was amazing, and the song is complex enough not to get boring (i use to have a lot of trouble with varying my songs and they seemed to get repetitive but you seem to have got that part down already) So yea overall its nice apart from the technical problems :)